No matter what the essay questions, share a
part of your soul in the story. Avoid writing factual essays such as "I
volunteered in a nursing home as a junior for 10 hours a week and it was very
meaningful because I got to help people in need." Instead tell about a
relationship you developed with a patient and how you grew as a result of this
relationship.
Colleges ask for an essay because it helps them understand
you as an individual, apart from grades and test scores. It is an opportunity
to show the admissions committee who you are, what's important to you and why.
Unfortunately, not all students take full advantage of this. Admissions
officials want essays that are fresh and original; essays that reflect you interests,
ideas, and style; essays that indicate your ability to organize your thoughts
and present them in coherent, grammatical form. They don't want to read
strained attempts at the perfect essay, the essay you think they want to read.
Because the people who read your application have no preconceptions about
you, the essay is their chance to get to know you. Let them in. Take
chances. Be spontaneous and truthful. The essay should whet their
appetite. You want to evoke a response.
Writing Help:
The best place to start is with a Medina High School teacher
who can help you decide on a topic, organize your thoughts and proof read your
essay. DO NOT SEND AN ESSAY WITHOUT HAVING IT PROOFED!
There are several internet sites that will also help you
to get started, but remember to ultimately have one of your teachers proof the
essay in the end.